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Where the water lay

The water lay here on the floor,
Next to the door,
Out opn a spur,
Ground up fur,

The water lay here on your bed,
Next to your head,
Out in the shed,
Ground up lead,

The water lay here in your house,
Next to a mouse,
Out of your blouse,
Ground up louse,

The water lay here in your room,
Next to the broom,
Out on a shroom,
Ground up BOOM,

The water lay evil and still,
Next to the pill,
Into your mouth,
Way down south.

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