The liability of responsibility
weighs heavy on shattered heart.
Hidden beneath false tranquility
kaleidoscope emotions torn apart.
Frozen, in shadowed conviction.
The winter of my forgotten soul.
The pieces of emotional deriliction
dead petals fall, into blackest hole.
Refractions of splintered thought
float on breezes of mental wind.
Toppled morals again are sought
the damage done I can’t rescind.
Author notes
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Word Bank
I Used All 14 Words
1) kaleidoscope 2) refractions 3) topple (any form) 5) shadow (any form)
6) pieces 7) shatter (any form) 8) liability 9) hidden 10) tranquility
11) breezes 12) frozen 13) petals 14) forgotten
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- Word Bank by poets whisper.
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Comments
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Wow, the rhyming is excellent. I love the way you wrote this, it actually touched me. The last stanza is my favorite part. Oh, and nice picture!
XemX
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Fantastic use of the word bank! Flawless in rhyme and flow, and so beautifully sand. This was definately soulful, and I can relate to the feelings conveyed. Wonderful job!
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GREAT!!
Loved it!...You're the "BluesMan".
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this is great. Good use of the words in the bank as well as good rhyme and flow. Thank you so much for the entry.
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As always, you do so much with words. Excellent rhyme and the best use of each. All that speaks of shattering and the visions through it.
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