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guys

I don't like u
He said
then
my soul
my life
my muse
filling my head
again he said
wonder what this means
and what that meant
oh,guys
either lost
or tell lies
they don't know
where to go
or what to choose
and at the end
they cry
they loose

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  • sgking123 silver member
    September 22
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    ah poor guys

    they sure area confused and greedy lot.. I ahve alot on this please do check my page...loved this poem sow ell!