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Cluttered

he shuts himself away in draws
hoping she'll never find his heart beneath
the clutter he forces into his chest;

only to lose himself withing the
lines of a letter he never wrote.

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is this too short?
It doesn't really make sense...but you get that.

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  • pdigiddy
    January 28
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    I understand

    Been there, I like your short but powerful take on the pic.