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Whistle why you work

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It was the middle of the night, in the middle of the road
I could feel it coming, it was ready to explode
I felt it in my head, and all in my hands
I did what it said, obeyed all demands.

Then I cried so sweetly
You fell asleep beneath me
But nothing is forever
Hey, let’s get back to Denver,
and find some reason to never get home.

Now it’s dawn, I’m still in the road
Lying face first, the blood has flood
I remember your hair, but mostly your eyes
How did it taste, your final surprise?

Then I died so sweet
You washed your hands so neat
How’d you get so mean?
There was nothing in between, you or I,
I guess it was all a lie,
and your need to
focus on yourself.

Now it’s dusk, I’ve crawled off the road
Dragging my legs, crushed by your load
The cat’s got my tongue, the vultures my eyes
How did it feel, to sever your ties?

Then I died so sweet
You washed your hands so neat
How’d you get so mean?
There was nothing in between, you or I,
Thank you for the lullabye.

Care to listen?

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Written February 17th, 2004

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  • horus8 gold member
    November 16, 2004
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    The link is in the poem, so go listen.

  • jennjenn
    November 16, 2004
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    that was a little wierd, but kind of sad and angsty, i liked it. the beat was also very nice.


  • aristeia
    November 16, 2004
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    this seems like it would be a really nice song...i'm assuming the wreck is a metaphor of sorts. would love to hear the actual music along with the lyrics.

    whoops...the song is actually there...guess i'll dl it and listen :-)
    Edited on Nov 16, 4:09 p.m. because 'own stupidity'.


  • B2oH
    February 21, 2004
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    Yah...Is Good

    Nice song write!

    Love the chorus, Horace - this rocks so sweet. Love to hear how it sounds with the amp turned up to 11.

    You do the weirdest angst - but its a good weird.


  • Naughtygrlred
    February 18, 2004
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    you still rock


  • MissHapps
    February 18, 2004
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    Still in love, sweetie, sorry...Just a bit leary is all!!!
    I like the 'bent' without all the 'bull'...When you know those "...", you know them so close you bleed them.

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