Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Special sun and moon to shine with me

The sun dropped to set on the sea
i looked at it as the day began to flea
away it went and the moon rose
then i thought it was missing a rose
that is all that it needs to illuminate
a beautiful thing that makes me fascinate
with all the water beside me i needed something
a kind of love like a sail to take me on
simply a beautiful cute lady that turns me on
she would take me to all the places on earth
beneath the winds of love it comes forth
to a place where the moon gets closer than before
watching glitter while kissing the beautiful girl i adore
away from my thoughts i looked down
and saw a beautiful gown
and i saw a lady swimming
so i sat down to watch her body glimmering
she moved like a rose on a swift river
and the moon was beautiful and silver
the water carried her like her a magical horse
while the moon watched hanging in a magical pose
her eyes turned around and she saw me
so i looked at her the way i looked at the moon
and it was like i saw the moon int the afternoon.

A contest entry

jusst try to be there

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Sandygram
    January 27

    Edit | Reply
    This was a wonderful poem. I enjoyed reading. The rhyme was great and the imagery very heartfelt. Thank you for sharing. Best of luck. You taske care. Sandy