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For you

You wink and smile
Tease and pretend tears
Laugh with me
Through all the years
Your heart is light
Your love is warm
Your compassion great
So that feelings swarm
I catch my breath
And hold my chest
Gazing at
The very best
A wonderful friend
A rock so true
And all I can give
Is me to you.

Author notes

Sorry about before, I forgot to make that other one a rhyming poem *eye rolls*

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  • Anu-Nataraj
    January 27
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    so cute !

    very nice right !

    extremely powerful !!

    good luck !


  • StarEyes
    January 27

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    What a wonderful read this one is! I love it! It is soft and feels like a delicate touch for one heart to another.
    Great job!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • MizaLePiza silver member
    January 27
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    Good job hun.


  • Angelflower
    January 27

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    aww this was really beautiful! you wrote this so softly the ending was perfect! bravo darlin'.
    best of luck in the contest.

    Angel