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Will you hold me?




skin so soft
thoughts unseen
heart beats warm
wings are born

fingers crave another
souls becoming hungry
a smile no longer reaches
and sighs keep clustering

some how i've transformed
no idea of what i am now
for mirrors don't exist
as i try to comprehend.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • fernandafreire
    January 29

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    Great piece of writing and I loved the end:

    some how i've transformed
    no idea of what i am now
    for mirrors don't exist
    as i try to comprehend.

    WAY TO GO!!!


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    January 27

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    you've created a picture all of your own with your words. incredible imagery.. wow, this one is very deep to me.. this poem is brilliant and I love the last stanza..

    good luck
    kat


  • thejollytinker
    January 27
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    What a quartet of words, your title. And you followed it up, Krystal!