Passing each one with no regard
they reach out in desperation
and I ignore each sinner.
I am a sixth generation
with no prior experience
as to handle this situation.
So when asked upon
I do not run but fly
up to the heavens
which abondoned me.
Author notes
option 4
10 lines
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie!!! by Sweet Impatience.
1050 points, ended February 1, 8 entries
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What to do in an insane world?
Comments
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excellent job with this poem, I loved the first stanza the most. I really like your take on the prompt.
good luck
kat
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That's the companion to the picture.
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I absolutely love that first stanza!!! Just gorgeous!! You did a beautiful job telling the story of the lost angel.....Well done and best wishes...
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this was beautiful.. softly read, and wonderfully expressed. I love your view on the picture..
bravo my dear.. best of luck in the contest!
Angel
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