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Nine Notes




Northern night
nurtures nirvana
noticing nerves next note
  ~numb~
nostalgia nauseates
nodding nastily.
  never needing nocturnal neurons.

Nine notes nestling need
nothing negotiated
no-one's nascent
never-ending nothingness.

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  • MathiasThom
    January 31, 2009
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    good

    I really enjoyed this... The background complimented the words...

    great job!