Choking on my last farewell,
I fall facedown.
Buried in water,
Can I live any longer?
The waves sing their songs.
Swallowed in your sick spell,
Once more I drown.
My eyes close for the last time,
But in your heart I never die.
My curse lives on.
Author notes
prompt: swallowed
A contest entry
- Swallowed by jinsays.
1200 points, ended February 8, 2009, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow
i like this!
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Wow.
I think you did a fantastic job here.
You nailed it nicely.
Love,
jin
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I liked it
I think it is good!!!
i really liked it....
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and society bleeds again<>>nice work
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great
I thought you did a great job, you laid out raw emotion, with no cover ups and I like that
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