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I love you

I love you
By Charles R Marks


Dedicated to my wife Kylie


When I wake up
I'm grateful to have you
Laying next to me
I'm grateful to know
I have you,I love you

When I think of you
Your more important than my beloved sports
When i wrote this
I wanted to see you smile and know I love you

When I dream
In my dreams I see us dancing
Lasting longer than anyone could have predicted
I'm grateful to know
It's us until the end of the time

When I say I love you
Those words are so true
I love you more every single second I set my eyes on you

Author notes

To My Wife Kylie

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  • honey bear
    January 27
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    a beautiful heartfelt write full of love for one you hold so dear, how very lovely to read this it is such a refreshing change from all the dark and dismal writes that so many put on their pages, i wish you both all the happiness in the world for all eternity together