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miles away

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like bird on tie-dyed wing
dancing in yellow swirls of sunlight,

she is dashing hopes & dreams
into the roadway,

being burnt by passing cigarettes
shedding tangled hair
like molted feathers fading,

she holds her tears inside for you.

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  • JinSays gold member
    February 9
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    Heartbreaking.
    I dont think any more needs to be said.
    Love,
    jin


  • maralisa silver member
    January 27
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    aw wow a brilant take on the promt so dep and powerful god luck in the contestmaralisa