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like bird on tie-dyed wing
dancing in yellow swirls of sunlight,
she is dashing hopes & dreams
into the roadway,
being burnt by passing cigarettes
shedding tangled hair
like molted feathers fading,
she holds her tears inside for you.
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In a list
A contest entry
- A Million Miles Away. . . by JinSays.
1150 points, ended February 9, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Heartbreaking.
I dont think any more needs to be said.
Love,
jin

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aw wow a brilant take on the promt so dep and powerful god luck in the contest
maralisa





