The ink speaks words
our mouths cannot form.
Our cries of pleasure
lie encrypted as echoes
on our skin.
Our passion melts our
individuality as we
flow together.
In union, we are more
beautiful than apart.
Cling to me.
Author notes
Option 4
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: http://pascoe-photography.deviantart.com/art/Us-3-90810190
5 – 10 lines
A contest entry
- Adult Quickie ! by AngelKat42.
1200 points, ended January 28, 2009, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
Comments
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This one here, this brought life to that image. Such details, such a feel to it, amazing.
Congrats on the shiny
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Tasteful and discreet. I like "encrypted." It's a beautiful expression of pleasure and love.
Congrats on the silver trophy.
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beautiful poem, filled with intense emotions. this one brought a smile to me, simply beautiful..
good luck
kat
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Penned with such feeling..
a wonderful piece hun
Tattoo of softness etched
Best wishes to you
Julie
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