without right recipe
both pancakes and sex
may flip out of form
Author notes
Prompt: pancakes & sex
12 words exactly
I could not resist this gremlin! GRIN
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie Now #8 by amaranthine lover.
400 points, ended January 27, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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flippin out...
I have fallen off the 'grill' a time or two... -
Oh God I needed a laugh
thanks still giggling
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nice metaphor here, it does take a certain chemistry for all things to work.
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I don't suppose it matters on which side your pancakes are buttered or what kind of syrup you smother them if you don't start with the right recipe they won't be acceptable to the discerning palatte.
Good luck in the contest.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
ps. Sounds like you have the recipe for a winner to me.
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Leo
I cannot resist this: you forgot to comment on the other half of the poem! Having said this ... I take full blame of being kicked out of AP. Blessings my friend. Frans
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ha ha
angel or demon
neither one can resist the gremlin
of flipping pancakes
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not what I expected but loved the imagery!
Juls
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awesome um, even a flopsided pancake is good with syrup and butter
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Mmmm, I love pancakes! And uhm... sex... Of course both with the right recipe! A fun read that leads ones mind to happy thoughts :-)
blessings and *stomps
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I really liked this a lot. So much to say. Love the play on words! Well done.
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Thank you so much for the Silver ...
on this tantalizing contest -- a genre I rarely indulge in. But I must admit: I know how to flip a pancake.
All the best for your future poetic inspirations.
Love
Myra
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This is
flippin funny! A good day to start my day ... ahemmm ... I mean toast might be a safer option!! Lovely. Frans
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awww
the picture look so pretty
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Your playful side??? 
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i like this one
great take on the prompt....
i think you beat mine
good luck in the contest
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