Lust filled evenings,
Breakfast in bed?
I crave more,
Pancakes & sex.
Author notes
idk i kinda went with it lol
A contest entry
- Quickie Now #8 by amaranthine lover.
400 points, ended January 27, 3 entries
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Comments
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You took the obvious road of the prompt, not always bad, but it doesn't allow for much creativity. Overall it was a good write, but a poor take on the prompt.
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thanks i tried.
the short prompts are so hard on me.
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you went with it great!
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a nice take on the prompt thanks for entering
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