In lavender rememberances
one scented heart
wrapped in vignetted shades
of a crumpling soul
~trembles~
as love kisses her neck
like last spring
the spirit of being
laid over countless quivers.
With embracing continuity
she sits,
the window ever enlarging
as she packs
her minute tender dreams
of reunion of soul and heart
but she refuses
to live in his death.
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Option 3
http://skategirl.deviantart.com/art/Alone-in-the-City-110776784
A contest entry
- Quickie Time!! by Sweet Impatience.
1200 points, ended January 28, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautiful
poem that you've penned.. absolutely beautiful. it's emotional painful, and sad to me, but within this poem I've found hope.. and for me hope is always a good thing.. the imagery that is throughout this poem is vivid and excellent
good luck
kat
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Really beautiful... tragic yet there is a strength in this that offers hope... Best of luck.
Ken
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thanks
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Wonderful
Great take on the picture. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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thanks penman
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