Grasping only eternity beyond one another’s gazes,
we inhale the purest of oxygen as once injured wings,
glide towards the heavens.
Hearts entangled in our heated inertia
we're charmed by idealistic dreams of freedom as lovers.
Yet, trade marked impression scaring our hearts.
Condemning us eternally as slave and master
Alone… leaving the two us in perpetual servitude.
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絆恋のから騒ぎ:Translation[ Bonds of Love ]
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Comments
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this is an incredible poem. one that's very deep & powerful. one written from the heart. this is absolutely beautiful, the imagery in fantastic.
good luck
kat
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What a lovely write!! Starts with beauty ends with darkness!! U have used the prompt nicely!!! I liked the picture!!
Good luck fella!
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You do have a way with words (LOL). A beautiful composition with soaring imagery and hope that is constrained by the reality of your last line... Really well done!
Ken
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