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Valentine –[Cinquain]

sweetness
of chocolates
boxed in a Valentine
your smile… has hearts over your head
…like mine



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picture 2; inspiration
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  • Ethereal One gold member
    January 29, 2009

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    This is so sweet!
    Not only the chocolates, but the smiles that you both have over your heads.
    Love can be so wonderful.

    Excellent work my friend!

    Good luck in this contest!

    Jeannette


  • Samplette gold member
    January 27, 2009

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    ah, what a sweet little cinquain. Very nicely crafte. Like the picture you paint. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam