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All I Ask For

All I ask for
Is for you to come and take my hand.
Ask me if I love you every day

Make me feel special
Tell me you love me
Hold me when I feel lost
Kiss me when I'm scared
Be there every day

When we're walking in the park
When we're kissing in the rain
When you dance with me in the middle of the street
When you make me feel like we meant to be
I just want to hear you love me.

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  • Allie-
    January 27
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    awww! i love this!<3
    my favorite line is: Hold me when I feel lost

    ~Allie <3