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For You

The Stuff You Do
Is Nothing New
But No Matter What
I Will Be Here For You

Please Tell Me What You Think!!!

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Fearlessemochick
    January 28

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    i like it and it could be longer but i have a short poem like this and i thought it was better than mine. mine is called lonely nights.


  • WhisperingMystic
    January 26
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    OK but...

    ...could be better. All caps makes it harder to read. Third and forth  lines could be revised to fit the flow better. Maybe...

     

    No matter what
    I'm here for you.

     

    Keep at it you're doing well.

     

    Dig deeper into your emotions about this and don't worry about trying to rhyme.