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Explore the Sound Waves

Let's go somewhere
That we can see the stars
Cause baby I know
We have come so far
From the people we used to be

I know that we never were this way before
Just give me a little child like faith
And I swear I will never let you fall
Just let me in baby and I
Will show you my world

Where the pain can also have a little good
And music is the only compainoin you'll need
We can leave the reall world behind
And live in one with only us to think about
So take my hand and come explore the sound waves with me

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  • Bohemianwriter
    January 31
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    i really loved this. really. it was...prrf i just dnt know lol, it was amazinng...