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Chain's of Pain

bound by chains
screams of pain
brother can't you help me
stop the pains of the weak

do you gain a sick pleasure
from the pain of the measured?

raped & beaten down
the painted perfection
of  a love sick clown.

baby this sickness is
causing you to break
me into little pieces

Author notes

word list # 12

screams
chains
brother
torture
pleasure
pain
raped
beaten
window
baby

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  • Horcrux.Breathing
    March 31

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    Beautiful I love it

    raped & beaten down
    the painted perfection
    of a love sick clown

    the ryhme is so smooth and dosnt sound forced
    this write really flows well.
    It is a very emotional poem