This dream of love to fade does wish,
My crying broken pride fell into death,
Because my lover believe not in foolishness,
This dream of love to fade does wish,
To lie he planted on my lips his kiss,
Now the rope of death has crept,
This dream of love to fade does wish,
He wrote his goodbye while I slept.
Author notes
word bank # 6
wish
believe
wrote
rope
death
crying
love
pride
lie
Also this poem is written in the style called: Triolet
A contest entry
- word bank inspired by serenity silvermoon.
430 points, ended January 28, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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You did well to use all the words and given form and weave a story but much better would have been the results if you ha been allowed to write freely and not to so many prompts.
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