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Spend The Night

Spend the night with me,
so that our passion can be set free
embraced in this moment together.
Letting our lips embrace
while I hold your body against mine,
locked in the moment of such bodily passion.
But this is so much more,
than just these carnal desires
which we do feel.
I long  just to hold you, kiss you,
to shut out the world from us,
where we can be ourselves
away from the eyes of others.
Not to worry of what we say
or how we act,
for no one will hear or see.
Alone together,
letting our hearts be expressed
both through actions and words.
Spend the night with me,
so that we can be alone
and share the love
which burns in our hearts
for each other.

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  • liltxgirl
    January 26, 2009
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    this was very sweet and romantic i like poems like these


  • FrozenredTears
    January 26, 2009
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    I like this a lot. I know how you feel here. nice write keep them up.