How is love perfect?
Everyone fights.
Everyone falls.
Every relationship has its flaws.
What if its imperfections make it perfect?
I never thought the day would come
where I would find someone to love me as I am.
To understand me even when I may not.
I never thought I'd see the day
where someone could make me feel this way.
You make me feel strong even when something goes wrong.
You make me feel perfect even when I'm a mess.
You never judge me for the way I act or dress.
You've only loved me, and I love you.
I never thought I'd find someone who makes me feel the way I do.
Who warms my heart with the strength of ten thousand suns.
Whou can brighten my day even when I come undone.
Who can hold me and calm my soul when my world seems to fly out of control.
I never thought that we would fight.
I never dreamed that I would fall.
I'd never admit this relationship had its flaws.
But I love you anyways.
This love we share for all to see,
this perfectly imperfect love,
was made by you and me,
its everything and more that I want it to be.
Author notes
written for James
Is there anything I may improve on with this poem??
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i like this you can write good
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A great piece
There's a lot of truth in this.
If someone is looking for a perfect love in a person, they aren't going to find it. Where true love is really shown is when you can love an imperfect person perfectly -
Amazing
i love it! its so sweet and you two do share a very nifty love for one another. Beautiful sis. Love you.
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Wow, I love it.
I feel the same, although I'm not with the person who made me feel this way anymore.
Umm if you want to improve your poem... I guess go back and fix your grammatical errors. There are some. Other than that I really don't think there's anything you could fix, although I'm not an expert and I don't pretend to be. -
wow that was good yea i have two new poems you should check them out lol well this was a good poem
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