Islands of self doubt
drafts unwelcome kiss
from sequined red lips.
Candelabra voices reflect
inner emotions lost within
cascading explosive depths.
Unforgiving
Heartbreaking
Soul searching
Love’s Reminiscing
New flowing aspirations
leaks aquatic hurt feelings
told through castaway eyes.
Tears conjured up by life’s
swallowing affluent treasure
captured by our flaying embrace
Separating
Invocating
Tears falling
Life transcending
Cliffs of self pity
grasp calls unanswered
whispered from owl chants.
Pine steeples reflect secrets
yet revealed to unwavering ears
heard only by eternities waterfall
Condescending
Reprimanding
Love seeking
Faith revealing
Author notes
free verse form poetry.
Please tell me what you think
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Reflective
I am at a crossroad in putting my opinios in words. It can be called called soul searching or another purview of life, life of the sensitive mind.
I like this and i also thinks the theme goes forward and backward and it is heavily repeated, thus reminding me of the classic ODE; IMMITATION OF IMMORTALITY by either Wordsworth or Longfellow.
its ok, but read what i said and see.
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thanks for your comment, I can see definately your thoughts on this and agree with it. I revisited the classic Ode by William Wordsworth and can see parrells into his vision with mine. Thanks again. Ck
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Excellent
CK, this is a wonderfully penned piece of poetry my friend.
I am so happy to be back in the site, so I can stop by to read your stunning writes.
Well done.
Keep up with the great work.
Keep on penning.
Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful talents with us.
*S* Cynthia
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Thanks Cynthia for reading and commenting always good to hear from you.
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wonderful
Wow baby, you have blown me away with this one, I have been away from AP for some time and to come back to this sort of writing has been a wonderful for my soul.Your writes now have so much more meaning and the desrciption of words you choose are wonderful.Your writes come alive and jump off the monitor screen as we read them.The courses that you did ,have done wonders for your writing babe, and I am so proud of you.I know what it is like going 'back to school' when you are an adult lol lol.
I love your new way of writing, you take the reader on a wonderful journey and they can see and feel what your words are saying.
Keep up the wonderful work sweetness.
all my love,
Angel-anne
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thank you Angel, I'm glad you enjoyed. Yes those classes did help with my imagery and word choice.
Love ya bunches,
Charley
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This poem left me in awe. How you come up with all of these beautiful poems just blow me away and each one is soo very different. This one is shows great imagery. I love the way you did the lines. Leaks aquatic hurt feelings told through cast away eyes. I love that line. Amazing.
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Thanks Guinee for reading and commenting!! My poems are really different now after taking those courses. Anyway glad you liked.
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