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I Am Not Asleep

If summer is no longer summer
And the leaves begin to fall-
Prey, I no longer love you,
And I’ll call your name no more.

If I’m found amongst the leaves,
And the rain falls from the sky,
Prey-let me sleep.
And please, don’t ask me why.

When the night curls round me to sleep,
And when it silently dreams
I lay awake in solitude.
So lonely, and torn at the seams.

I cannot see the beauty,
So I lie amongst the leaves.
When you find me, my love, I prey
Kneel and sing a song for me.

But now, summer is summer,
And I am not asleep.
So take my hand and walk with me.
For your love I am sure to keep.

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  • MasterFoxFang
    March 22, 2009

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    Great

    this flyies by as well easy meaning for me to catch good rhyme scheme i love it not all poems can catch me like this but this one did i must thank you for sharing this poem with me cause i see nothing wrong with it great here is a poet line from me
    Glistening white light from your eyes
    Velvet soft hair so fine
    Baby i know that you can keep me in line
    Can't you see that i love you it's true
    Don't go we'll take it slow
    But for now lets sleep and and we will eventually become complete.

    Thanks