Explosions, Emotions Wicked stuff
Running, Screaming Just a bluff
Hide my soul, Hide my mind Stop
Take a chance, Make a choice Go
Green light, Red light Fade to black
Wake up, Lay down Dont look back
To plunder, To wonder Shut up
Forever, For better Listen
Lying, Whining Its so true
The cold, The dark All so blue
Contemplate, Demonstrate Death
Play with it, Lose with it Life
Bridges, Stairways Try to fall
Rivers, Oceans Drink it all
Sticks to stones, Guns to bones Fear
Needles to skin, Cocaine to touch Sooth
Straying, Blaming Lost with time
Hiking, Killing Without crime
Feel the beat, Shake the floor Laugh
Pills take two; Knives take one Cry
Sweat drops, Tear drops Wipe them away
Scratches, Bruises Only for today
Toys are shiny, Metal is dull Believe
Fire can burn; Words can heal Envy
Painting, Prying Run around
Driving, Drinking Cant be found
I want you, I need you Sleep
I hate you; I love you Dream
A contest entry
- Write the best poem in history. by DumbBaby.
900 points, ended February 3, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Aren't I Emo?
Comments
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Next time you should read the rules.
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haha. You are emo. But being aware of your emo-ness negates the lameness of being emo. This is a very nice poem.


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This is a fine poem, and has a meterd feel to it,
Love the flow, the rhymes, and antonyms were refreshing, this brings out some dramatic imagery with flair. Well done!




