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Cleansing (Seeding Life)

You speak as if you echo your light
You're locked up inside upon the body you love to see.
Pray that you release

the chains of multiverse emotion.

I want to peel your skin.
I want to take whats left of your image.
With this we both know you don't need your body.
I'll call for the storms to shower your red dripping carcass.

 

These eyes are shattered.

Smell the perfume of your burning body.

I know it hurts.

Learn how it feels to leave your body.

 

Take this hand and burn it

Plead for your skin to melt away.

Free yourself, erase yourself.

The air tastes of blood and bone.

 

Assuage your face to show your pearly whites.

Don't be 'fraid.

Enjoy the flames licking your body

Appreciate those last seconds of pain.

For when your free from it all

you can no longer feel a thing.

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

While listening to Tool I summed up a bit of some thoughts that I've been having. I just wanted to show how I want to be free from it all, the stress is just killing me but we all have to remember that without it there would be no balance.

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  • Danna Hobart
    February 12
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    A nice and dark write.

    Thank you for entering my cotnest.


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    January 31

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    Wow. Effective imagery.
    The bloody carcass really was one that made me stop and think over before I continued. The last lines perfectly summed up the desire to be free.

    Thank you for entering my contest and good luck

    Shari


    • greenheart4
      January 31
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      :)

      Thank you. I'm glad to find that you enjoyed my entry.
      Thank you for the favorite!