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Prayer on Fairy Wings~

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Prayer on Fairy Wings~

 

Disparity upon thin wings of gold,

feeble fears weighing, inside soft feather.

Placed by stone edges, on pathways of old,

enticing fairy, crisp clouds can’t sever.

 

Breath of element, pillow mountain fall,

if my wings don’t flutter, gracefully fair.

Celestial souls of light hear my call,

Fill mystical ears with soft spoken prayer.

 

Living waters, favour fairly my tongue,

I thirst to bathe, immersed in pure glory.

Imbue my imaginations twice young,

twisting until hymns of heaven tune me.

 

Gossamer wings sing to nature’s wisdom,

My lungs surge to flourish beneath each sun.

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(Aire_Elemental_by_Staldren)

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  • Angelflower
    January 29

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    oh this was way beyond beautiful.. very sigh worthy lol. you really did such a lovely job on this write.. I loved the magic here in your words... beautiful.. thank you very much for sharing. best of luck.

    Angel

  • tara wilson gold member
    January 27
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    beautiful


  • Stardust-luvr
    January 27

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    wow hon xxxxx a mastery of presentation spoken from the heart. On gossamer wings you lift me up from darkest of thoughts. well done and many blessings always xxx love you xxxx


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    January 27

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    WOW This is brilliant and beautiful. Absolutely stunning in both wording and layout. Best of luck.

    Linda


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    January 27

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    A beautiful masterpiece!!!

    And such a breathtaking sonnet to fill our poetic cups of wonder!! Thank you for sharing, I'm wishing all the best to you!! And good luck in the contest, you've written another winner!!
    & always,
    xx Cyn xx


  • poeticpieces
    January 27

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    Wow~

    Dad, you're so amazing..and your words you weave shine through each poem you pen. I love this one, but as always, you for sure. Thanks for sharing, and I love you Dad. Tim Jr.


  • Amera gold member
    January 26

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    I love your fantasy poems and when you pen them in sonnet form, they simply sing. Thanks for the magic!

    Love,
    Amera♥

  • your skill of language and mastery of imagery in this write is fantastic. i wish i only had half of your skill. fantastic job and i wish you the best of luck in this contest that you have entered. viyanna rosemarie

  • Great take on the prompt. I really like "Celestial souls of light hear my call,/Fill mystical ears with soft spoken prayer. Good write.




  • StarEyes
    January 26

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    Oh my! What a beautiful job you did on this one! I love the gentle feel your words bring to the picture. The feel here is one to bring *sigh* to the reader!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta

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