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Nature

Delicate morning dew on the swaying dancing trees
The plants hidden wonders that you have to search to see
A bluebird sings her joyful song to the pure and bright blue sky
A lover calls, she takes a jump and spreads her wings to fly
The sushines rays peek shyly through the early morning mist
It spreads it light onto the fields like a mothers tender kiss
The miracles the world provides hide in front of your own nose
Nature is a wonderous being that lives with no true foes

Author notes

Yet ANOTHER math class poem. I get really really bored in there

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  • Shelby K
    May 18

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    i loved this poem. great use of imagery and rhyme. it makes me feel like i am actually there and seeing the whole thing. it was a very enjoyable read. keep up the great writing.


  • OnceUponAMind silver member
    April 20

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    Just beautiful - I love the flow and rhythm of emotion expressed here... Along with the rhyme! I feel like I am in the middle of the great wilderness when I read this. Great job, you paint a lovely picture of nature here.

    Amber


  • Gormanda
    April 15

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    I am wondering if this was following any particular form? The end couplet seemed abrupt. I loved the lines about the lover and the bluebird which are put parallel to each other. This is a good nature poem because it seems to say something deeper. Good job!


  • StormyDawn
    February 22

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    So beautiful. Wonderful imagery in this poem. I think your math class poems are the best. This one is so amazing. It felt like I was outside with the sun shining down on my face. Wonderful write.


  • apoeticinjustice gold member
    February 7

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    beautiful writing here...nicely rhymed and easy flowing. A very enjoyable read. Thanks for entering. Well done.
    Rory


  • Hillview
    February 4

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    Beautiful but needs some edition as to your typo.
    It's good to see someone like you to appreciate beauty that surrounds you. Yes, Nature is a wondrous thing.


  • Rhythm Child
    January 27

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    i know how you feel with the math class lol

    I loved the gentle rhyme that coursed through the poem and the soft imagery used.
    very enjoyable to read

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