Lilac serenades
topple over subliminal crusades
laughing and weeping
multiple emotions supplying heartbeats
another second
another minute
but not giving hours of solace
to shards of glasses
that one calls beautiful.
Her selfless passion
floats on murky waters
concealing honest consequences
to dilute in scientific acids.
The agonizing corrections
capture her innoncence
in a frame
rusty from eyes that stare.
She looks away from you
from me and from us
with crimson waters
surrounding her insanity.
For crying out loud
she would have held you close
if only you would have let her.
Now you wrap her
with purple flowers
that slowly turn grey
as her gown incinerates
in denial and acceptance.
For all she indebted
you were the worst
and for proving humanity
darkness condones your folly
sucked into an abyss.
... only black...
Author notes
I chose Picture 2
http://www.funerella.com/graphics/graveyard/albums/gothicpictures/depress.jpg
A contest entry
- Anything - to start with. by morgana raven.
550 points, ended February 5, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - It's Finally Time by incondite.
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Honorable mention
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Comments
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I like the way you layed this out, and the ending was brilliant with a superb lead up. Your description was spot on, a brilliant take on the prompt here.
Thank you for entering.
Laura -
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thanks
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You are a what
You never told me before you where that..
But in fact I don't care what ever you might be..
Luv ya anyway...
XXJeannette
ps will be back when the poem is finished
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ah wolfy!! U just like to waste your clappies now dont ya??? Thanks a bunch for them thoh!!! ( i got 9 points!) I am done for your eyes~!
luv
~pri
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