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Love is

Love is the wind blowing through the
trees
love is the birds singing in the
breeze
love is walking in the
rain
love is strolling down lovers
lane
love is walking barefoot in the
sand
love is just strolling hand in
hand
love is rolling in the soft white
snow
love is snuggling in the picture
show
love is knowing your feelings are
true
love is knowing that person is
you

Author notes

option #3 write a love poem
I have had writers block for so long just had to write something for the group.
so comments good or bad are welcome,

This is written in the new style I been working on.

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  • ItaloEtkin
    April 7
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    great emotion!


  • ScarletO gold member
    February 14
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    Such a nice feeling to this, well done.

  • goalsv
    January 30

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    A very good job of showing the feelings and looks of love. A great scheme with sucha flow that with each line you can see the love of that special one in each readers heart.

  • Warrior7
    January 29

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    Very well written, you pretty much summed up what love is about. Good work and thanks for entering


  • Mariana gold member
    January 28
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    WOW!  I don't see this as writer's block...if you have been struggling with it...then it is definitely a thing of the past. This is amazing. If this is your new style...keep writing like this. I think this is beautiful and eloquently expressed. Bravo!

    Mariana


  • countrybabe gold member
    January 26

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    Very Nicely Done

    I like this style. Well done and good luck in the contest my friend.

    Keep writing

    Countrybabe

  • amysticwriter silver member
    January 26
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    Beautiful, I agree...


  • J aime Coudre silver member
    January 26

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    This is wonderful...you may want to check the spelling on the one line...love is rolling in the soft white snow...other wise is great...Good luck...


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    January 26
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    great write, best of luck

    Tasha


  • catz Moderators member
    January 26

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    Yes, love is all of these things. Whether the sweet small things or the serious moments in a relationship, they all spell love and one is as important as the other.

    Your poem brings back many memories of the little things which we shared with our partner, from growing up, being a teenager and on into adulthood, they're all wonderful.

    Good luck in the contest
    (And this doesn't look like writers block to me)

    Dee


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    January 26

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    I think you did a good poem about Love is...

    it reminds me of a calendar I had once

    Good luck in the contest with your lovely words about Love
    XXJeannette

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