Don't you dare take him from me today.
You stay away, Death. Very far away.
I know you'll try to convince me,
Saying "But it's my time to have him, you see!"
You lie. It's MY turn to take him to the movies today!
Author notes
I love limericks. Haven't actually written one since I was about five though. But hey. I love them. Thought the whole five lines constrictions was perfect to try and write one again. 
A contest entry
- Quickie Time 1 by phoenixonfire.
400 points, ended January 26, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - FUNNY LIMERICKS! by Lanasaur.
472 points, ended February 9, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Formed poetry contest by Luciferschild.
650 points, ended March 1, 27 entries
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Comments
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took me a couple of reads but i thought it was creative, it does need a little work though. thank you for entering and good luck
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lol
this really funny well done best of luck in my contest -
i like it.....
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lmao
I was all uh...dis girls going to protect him through thick and thin and she turns out to be this selfish girl who needs company to movies.. I liked it! It really caught me off guard!!
Thanks for entering and good luck!!
~Pri
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