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Crimson Vendetta

Hollow incoherent chatters
echoes amongst the ether.
Blood thickened haze solidifies… 
Igniting damnation on cosmic mausoleums,
we died eons before we began to live

Author notes

Photo inspired.
http://images.elfwood.com/art/m/a/magem/dark_night_of_my_soul.jpg

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  • blueyez
    January 26, 2009

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    wow what a pic! I love the verbage you chose to use. Peace and love

  • phoenixonfire
    January 26, 2009

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    Fantastic!! I love the depth that u created by using the picture!! I like the connection u make from the death and life perspective!! Well done!!

    Thanks for entering and good luck!!

    ~Pri