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You never cried...

I hate fighting
You like fun
I'm the trigger
You're the gun
Pull the trigger
Hear the bang
Watch me fall
Six feet in.
I cry out
You simply sigh
You never cared
You never cried...

 

-Morgann Talbot

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  • Nikki Rowles
    February 26

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    Damn

    Wow...I forgot how...haunting your poetry was...this is a good write...short but good...lol...
    *Blessed Be*
    Lauren


  • MysticalRayne
    February 6
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    this is fantastic and your rhyme flows smoothly - nicely done