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Silence And Symphony









If she selflessly let cinnamon
tingle the aroma of her senses
intricate designs enveloping
sudden emotional clichés
wound in webbed  hostility
touching so tenderly
    across parched canvas
  claiming in flagrant passion
  the quiet enigmatic expulsion
  in sordid dreams
  like silence converted into
  red and khaki illusion
    ~singing her final symphony~











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Link: http://www.art.co.uk/asp/sp-asp/_/pd--10300060/sp--A/igid--1153001/Symphony_in_Red_and_Khaki_II.htm?sOrig=CAT&sOrigID=23945&ui=B7CE68BE85994867B3A2C708694F57BE

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    January 27, 2009

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    Beautiful is this as it is sad
    Trailing thoughts and feelings
    I loved the opening lines that lead you onwards
    and the final surrender, in the last three wonderful lines
    Thank you for your entry
    Best wishes Julie


  • storiesuntold
    January 26, 2009
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    Very good write here

    I love the way you entertwined the senses and the illusion of one of stature


  • morgana raven Greeters member
    January 26, 2009

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    ooooh, I like this you used some brilliant description here. Wonderful write. Good luck in the contest =D
    Laura

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