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I Promise

I promise, To keep you safe,
I promise, to never let him hurt you again.
I promise, it will be all right,
But most of all I promise to keep my promises.

I promise to keep you safe,
I promise to love you always,
I promise to hug you tight,
And I promise to keep my words to you.

How much do you really appreciate your life.

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  • chunk2010
    January 29
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    that was awsome! good job on the poem it meant a lot to me.


  • XxXskeletonXxX
    January 26
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    thats really good i love it
    it seems to have real meaning behind it
    its amazing


  • hyper thing
    January 26
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    wow this is really good
    expecially the repitition