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Poetic inspiration
Words that hold the world

Freely flowing
Within our minds
Released with simple
movements
Pen across the page

I sit and wonder
What I would say

I think about this
and write
Poeticweaver
a man who helps
everyone in need

a pure poet
with simple
needs

more later

A contest entry

i have not been able to write for awhile so im rusty if its bad tell me

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  • yung nyghtmare
    November 23, 2009
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    nicely riten.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    September 13, 2009
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    I really appreciate this, just wanted to come back once again and thank you so much. Hope you know that I care, and will always cherish this piece of poetry you weaved for me. Thank you so much.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 27, 2009
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    Thanks so much for all the love you've shown me.
    Stay sweet, and know I'm here for ya as you are me.

    Peace


  • Gunther gold member
    February 24, 2009
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    Nicely done! The second stanza says it all. Simple, but not so simple. Great job!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 4, 2009

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    Thanks Daughter Dear~

    You are very precious to me, and I thank you for sharing your heart with my own.. I appreciate this beautiful poem that has touched my heart tenderly. I'm honored to have an ap daughter here such as yourself, and one who remembers me, and shares here love so beautifully, making me smile on my day of birth. Thanks for being you, you Much love right back attcha sweet soul!

    Your AP Daddy~


  • Stardust-luvr
    February 4, 2009

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    this brought tears for since I have known Timothy first as my friend and now our friendship has grown tenfold and more. Timothy is a true spirit whom has one of the most compassionate hearts and spirits the world ever known for he holds everyone he meets with such high regard and faith. It breaks my heart to ever see him saddened by society's cruelty and aches that send the soul into bottomless caverns. He lifts each person up held in warmed embraces upon his angelic wings of love. well done and many blessings always xxx thank you for sharing in the celebration of Timothy's special day beneath lucid skies of love .xxxx Timothy is loved way more than he may realize I for one love my brother with all my heart and couldnt imagine my life without him a part of it.

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