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Take A Moment To Meet The Lady

From a child to a lady,

lessons learned,
following your dreams,

respect to be earned.
rights and wrongs honey,

you deal the cards,
learning to be a lady,

it can be hard.

From toys to harmons,

and styles to fit in,
be yourself honey,

its the only way to win.
Sometimes its hard

to hold that smile,
but it's what will get you through

the longest mile.

When you are just starting out,
often not to get your way

you sit and pout.
The biggest part of learning

with the help of Mamas firm hand,
listen to her darling

for heartaches aren't in her plans.

Mama said boys are just learning

so don't believe their lies,
he is a handsome young man

with those come on eyes.
He will give you gifts

his touch will melt your soul,
but listen to mama

and heartaches won't unfold.

Take a moment to meet the lady to be,
Take a moment

and when in doubt think of me.
Take a moment and remember

you are your Daddy"s girl,
and if you hold yourself true

will stay that polished pearl.

See the girl, the lady, the woman to be,
she is in his reflection

in his eyes don't you see.
Know what you want in life,

let not a tear distort your view,
and know honey it is all up to

what you decide to do.

Look about at all your friends,
how many times

their heart you helped mend.
For they fell for the lies

and in turn they fell you see,
too young to see the pain

but let the boy take the lead.

Be the lady the woman

without sorrows and pain,
learn all you can and stay happy

know respect was gained.
To enjoy life yet be true to yourself,
you will then see a woman of great wealth.

Author notes

Have all the friends you can have be kind and loving and with all you can stand . Turn not away from friendships yet keep yourself safe for their are those you may befriend that has lost their way .Follow them not if you know its not right and let not your heart know of heartbreak .For to be young and know heartbreak you must understand . The boys are just learning so stay safe and take a stand say no and in time you will see . The heartbreack will be on the ones who refuses to see

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  • afroqban
    January 28

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    wow, though i cant relate to being a lady, i can say that you really make me think men and women relate as far as growing into what we NEED to be. i enjoyed this, i love the many topics you are able to scribe on.


  • Paloszoo gold member
    January 27

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    Excellent advice in this wise and insighful poem. Great job! Thanks for entering my contest. It's a pleasure to read your work!


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    January 26

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    You never fail to amaze me hun
    Deep, profound and beautiful
    Love and always
    and best wishes in Kim's contest
    Julie


  • maralisa silver member
    January 26

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    aw wow patty I loved your poem its so beautiful as always your wise advise is wonderful god luck in the contestmaralisa

  • sleepinglion
    January 26

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    Sound advice

    This is the advice the boys hope the girls don't listen to. How to avoid the tempters snare, when you are so young and inexperienced, it is easy to fall for weasel words which are used just to gain advantage.

  • amysticwriter silver member
    January 26
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    Love this poem, great advice...

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