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A cloud in the sky,
Light and free,
Floats on by,
Lazily.

The lightning flashes.
The thunder roars.
Each as free,
As the eagle soars.

The mighty river,
Meanders to the sea.
Nothing will stop it,
It will always flow free.

Blazing fire,
Scorching flame.
Always free,
Never tame.

In all its forms,
Nature is free,
Uncontrolled
By humanity.

This is the way,
Nature should be.

Author notes

Another nature poem, oh well hope you enjoy and/or agree. As always please be honest if you wish to comment.

Written February 17th, 2004

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  • Adz the Genious
    June 1, 2004
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    Not bad, not bad. a damn could stop rivers flowing tho and if ya chuck water on fire... not reli, very descriptive. we know that nature is the best becuz of hu made it. thumbs up!


  • Serene
    February 19, 2004
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    Such is the art of words,
    simply powerful that reveals
    the content of your poem.

    It's just wonderfully created!
    Well done!

    ~TC~

  • anotherautumn
    February 18, 2004
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    I love this..... it reminds us that we are all as wild and free as nature...


  • bloody tears
    February 18, 2004
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    Good

    Aww This is really good, I agree with you.. You made nature sound so beautiful ((well we all know it is but in words i guess its kinda harder to describe than a picture but you did it very well) Well done dave luv... Keep writing Luv *Beki*