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gLIMPse

Experimental/Breakbeat/Techno
Spoken

In the beginning of time, when the only thing that roamed the land was the Vaseline Man...

Catch a Glimpse
Of His Limp.
Bleeders.

-choir Ahhs-

And this is what you think of me.
Let your ears listen.

Here he comes, tumbling down through the forest.
Hair claws at him.
We must remember that the Rainbow Man had sucked,
Sucked all the life out of the world.

We called him...

Nova.

Nova, nova.
Listen Nova, here I come again.
Grabbing at my clothes, he pulls me under.
My colour drained, he becomes bigger and bigger.
Until he raves.

A plug-in malfunction.

Chomp, chomp.

Bare fisted beat fucking.

Chomp, chomp.

Aiiya.
Rave with me Rainbow Man.
The Vaseline Man can watch.
We can slide down the pavement on the slimy trail he leaves behind.

Let this be a reminder....

Chomp, Chomp.



Weird, I know, but that's what EM and DnB is

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  • LionessK silver member
    January 29
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    welcome to allpoetry

    An interesting flow and rhythm you have written this with. I like it. My favorite lines are the last five. The repetition of chomp chomp works really well. Nicely job.
    i wouldn't call this weird... maybe different but that is a good thing.
    Keep writing and enjoy the site.