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Sweeping Beauty

mirror, mirror, on the floor
insuffated lines of crystalline poetry
snow white, sweeping beauty
into olfactory faculties
awakens her like the frog's kiss
who's the highest of them all?

do you see the McKenna elves
making the universe's toys?
stare into the eyes of the seeress
she's in duress

mereror, mererror, on the floor
broke the white-coated mirror
coma white into unconsciousable seas
stepping through death's door

reflected in the right angle
addiction wouldn't be
D.A.R.E. hypocrisy
mirrorly, mirrorly, mirrorly
life is but a dream



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  • ramonesgrl135
    January 29

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    this is so good
    such a twist
    mirrors are not usualy mentioned in drug poems, but youve used it and more
    i love this poem
    so deep