You need your space?
As far as I can see,
She's in it.
You need time to think?
Balls deep in someone else,
I'm pretty sure your mind is blank.
You need to find yourself?
What a cop out.
You're right here, asshole,
And I won't let you run away from this.
It's not me, it's you?
You're damned right it is.
I can't believe I wasted
so much
of my life
on a snivelling
zit-ridden
unshaven
scumbag
like you.
Author notes
I've never been cheated on, thank God, but anyone who even thinks about it is in big trouble.
A contest entry
- In Honour of the Scorned Woman/Man by NurseChilly.
8000 points, ended February 28, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow, for someone who hasnt been cheated on this is a very convincing and passionate write!
i can feel real emotion, or maybe that is my own, as i can completely relate, anyway GREAT poem
thanks a lot,
i will be following your work
alex -
a good little rant!! lolol
my only niggle with this piece, is that some of the punctuation is a little awkward and in some places, missing altogether!
with some good editing and revision, this could be a good strong write......
well done and many thanks for entering this contest
G.x -
You need to find yourself?
What a cop out.
You're right here, asshole
haha brilliant
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i think you got your message across
very well done. gil will appreciate this entry - i like your style. love, lane
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