Swaying azure,
So fierce
Caressed wild tulips,
So gentle
Breathed in a nightingale song,
So fatal
Poured dew onto the sun
Retreating
Kissed his cerise lips,
In secret
Sliding down
Breathless...
A contest entry
- 30-40 words of Brilliance #53 by AutumnGypsy.
700 points, ended February 8, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think if you feel like it
Comments
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Loved this. The brevity, the word pictures ... and reading it again too, only the second lines.
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Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it. Sorry I'm so late with my reply - I do not show up here much too often.
Regards
Jan
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This was a very interesting way to write this one, it flowed very well with great visuals. Best to you in the contest
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Thank you very much/ I liked your contest - it was fun to try and put a lot in fewer words.
Much regards,
Jan
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good luck in the contest with this very descriptive and creative write, nice use of words makes the reader want to read it softly and slowly.
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Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked the poem.
Regards,
Jan
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