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Burnt sienna comeliness
beneath alpine gold,
Accentuated with raw beauty

A contest entry

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  • morgana raven Greeters member
    February 8

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    With few words, you used a brilliant few, and managed some vivid imagery. I love the sound of the word accentuated. Wonderful word choice here.
    Thanks for entering.
    Laura


  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    February 4

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    Hey congratulations on the gold you really deserve it this is a beautiful little masterpiece, its just so prettyfull x


  • Kari gold member
    January 27

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    Congrats on the gold. This is really beautiful. It's soft and delicate plus the words make it vivid.


  • honey bear
    January 27
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    congratulations on a well deserved gold for this lovely peice


  • Lady Michaella
    January 26

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    oo
    this is a beautiful poem!!! wow.
    a really stunning write here, such imagery...
    thanks for entering
    x


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    January 26

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    I read and then went to the image
    Beautifully scripted piece you have penned
    love alpine gold..
    best wishes to you
    Julie

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