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My Happy Buny is Delusional





Walking through an unseen crowd
little children are screaming for help,
but unfazed by despair  
                               I am no one.

Intoxicated with lies spewed
my eyes graze untouched land,
and for once I think I feel
                               a presence not my own.


Temperatures don't exist,
temptations are welcomed
something to make me feel.

 

 

 

 

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10-50 words
prompt - void

A contest entry

What to do in an insane world?

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  • Kari gold member
    January 27

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    I hate the feeling of feeling like you're noone. It sucks to feel that way.
    You've summed up the word void very well. Thanks for your entry.
    Kari