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A Night Of Endless Pleasure

 

 

 

You walk up to me in your black miniskirt,

with your hair sashaying in the wind.

You left your right leg up,

and place it upon my shoulder.

 

I grab hold of it and move in closer,

taking in the scent of your lovely mound.

I stick my tongue deep inside,

and feel your body as it starts to rock.

 

I slowly start to move in and out,

as you grab hold of my hair.

Pushing me deeper inside of you,

as you start to squirm.

 

I taste your sweetness as it flows,

upon my waiting tongue.

Then slowly push you back,

and lick the entire length of your leg.

 

Paying close attention to the tender spot,

right between your mound and thigh.

I push your leg back and pick you up,

placing your gorgeous body up against the wall.

 

Your beauty is beyond imagination,

unlike anyone I have ever met before.

I could stay here for an eternity and gaze,

deep into your beautiful emerald eyes.

 

Our lips lock as my hands move down,

embracing every curve of your body.

I start to tweak your nipples,

and squeeze your firm breasts in my hands.

 

I listen closely to you as you start to moan,

moving your hands toward my jeans.

You unbutton and unzip my fly,

reaching down you massage my cock.

 

You start to squeeze my balls,

as you stroke every inch of me.

You place your left foot on the wall behind you,

pushing off of it you jump onto me.

 

Holding tightly with your legs wrapped around my waist,

I start to slowly thrust into you.

I feel the inside of your wet mound,

as it oozes and contracts with every thrust.

 

I start to suckle your breasts,

and taste your sweat as it falls from your neck.

The smell of your perfume and hair,

is so intoxicatingly sweet.

 

You push me back and fall to your knees,

quickly swallowing every inch of my manhood.

I can feel myself as I continuously hit,

the back of your throat.

 

I spread my legs as you move under,

sucking my balls and the length of my shaft.

All the way from the base,

to the very top of its mushroom head.

 

You drive me crazy with every passing moment,

I can feel myself starting to cum.

You look up and can see it in my eyes.

You start to suck harder and faster.

 

Making me lose all control,

as I shoot my load down your throat.

I can hear you gulp and swallow,

as you take in every last drop.

 

I turn you around on all fours,

and start to thrust into you from behind.

Over and over again leaving you breathless,

as you start to orgasm and cum.

 

I feel your warmth as it floods my cock,

with it another stream of passion starts to flow out of me.

We slowly collapse onto satin sheets,

and soft feathery quilts upon our bed.

 

Lying on top of me you push my hair back.

Looking into each other's eyes,

we share a long and passionate kiss.

You stick your finger into my mouth.

 

Our heart beats start to slow,

as you rest your body upon mine.

Looking into your emerald eyes,

I see a teardrop form and fall onto my chest.

 

You smile letting me know,

how happy you are to be with me.

Wiping your tears I tell you the same,

and how fortunate I am to be with you tonight.

 

We close our eyes and slowly fall asleep,

reassured of our love for one another.

A love that we know is pure and true,

that we'll always cherish for the rest of our lives.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • carebear123
    February 15

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    this is probubly the best erotic poem i ever read. the detail was impressive. i liked it. i just think that some of the words you used took away from the sensuality of this poem. such as: the words mound and cock. for the way this was written i was hoping for less insenitive words. mostly because this is a very sensitive and meaningful poem. i thought it was really good though. Nice Job!


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 13
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    Man!

    This is dirty.


  • MYsecondchance
    February 6

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    this was beautiful, not only was it erotica but there was love there not clique but genuine, The Sixth stanza was my favorite because it was kind of a break from what was going on i really liked how you finished it.
    I really enjoyed reading this my friend good luck in this contest.

    the errors that piccola pointed out; you should go back and fix but i was not aware of them till i saw his comment.
    regardless great work


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    February 5
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    well done here.

    HOT HOTHOT

    Love
    Passions

  • liltxgirl
    January 26
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    that was beautiful keep up the great work


  • honey bear
    January 26
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    oooh wow........


  • hotchocolate gold member
    January 26

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    WTF!!!! You and theredcatjazzoflove gettin me all worked up readin you alls stuff!! Who going to lick the juices runnin down my leg now after reading this?! I loved this from you hon

  • i now want to fuck tha hell with you J you think its hilarious masturbating my pussy with this poetry don't you? you were fucken delicious in this piece and you got a little explicit with the words here and there you have excited me i want to fuck now ((shit!) kisses


  • esroddo silver member
    January 26

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    Wow that was so intense

    I could feel the passion and sexual excitement, You had my attention from start to finish. I really loved this write and how you finished it. Not only makeing it a sexual act but with that of love and what it means to make love to the one you love. Excellent write my friend I will read it again. I truly applaud your work. LISA

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