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what a wasted

i forgot

for one moment 

unintentionally

without malice's

it wasn't something i do

 

i came back to soon

wasn't ready for the truth

didn't know what to say

my world all a lie

ever word spoken meaningless

 

love with out merit

trust broken and bruised

your betrayal nothing in its self 

selfishly you hide

like a snake from its prey

 

"can i forgive you"

my god you are conceited

your no man

my eyes are wide open

i see you for what you are

coward

 

go.......

there is no more here for you

i watched you drain my life to long

you deserve nothing but contempt

find another to believe your lies

i pity her and renounces you 

 

 

 

Author notes

Prompt:

"Heaven has no rage like love to hatred turned, Nor hell a fury like a woman scorned,"

William Congreve

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  • NurseChilly gold member
    February 28
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    some good strong solid thoughts here, but some of the verbiage and punctuation errors let you down

    such as the use of your instead of you're and the heavy use of pronouns makes it a little top heavy too. but i will say thank you for entering this contest
    well done.
    G.x


  • Cannonsfire
    January 26

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    Think you need 'mercy' rather than 'merciless' in the context of the stanza hun. The rest is your contempt for this person, you can feel it C


    • solitarytear
      January 26
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      malice

      just worked it out.......thanks for letting me know hon......didnt even pick that one up.........so thank you again